Kuchh pal saath chale to jaanaa,
Rastaa hai jaanaa pehchanaa .
Saanso ko sur de jaataa hai,
Tera yo.n sapano mai.n aanaa.
Maine jatan kiye to lakho.n
Mann ne meet tumhi ko maanaa
Ab to haath thhaam lene do
Aur kaho na , na na , na na !
Sau janam ka saath apna,
Sans ka dhadkan se jaise,
Aas ka jeevan se jaise,
Kaise kate saal solah,
Shyam ki jogan ke jaise.
Jhoot ke parde na dhoondo,
Sach kaho na .
Kuchh kaho na ..
Ek dooje ke liye ham,
Haath main kangan ke jaise,
Pyaas main sawan ke jaise,
Roop ko darpan ke jaise,
Bhakt ko bhag_van ke jaise.
Jheel si simtee na baitho,
Kuchh baho na .
Kuchh kaho na ..
Jaanata hoon thak gayee ho,
Umr ke lambe safar se,
Saanp se dasate shahar se,
Aas se aur aansuon se,
Bheed ke gahare bhawanar se.
Waqt firata hai suno,
Itna daro na .
Kuchh kaho na ..
Kis tarah ladatee rahi ho,
Pyaas se parchhaiyon se,
Neend se , angadaiyon se,
Maut se aur zindagi se,
Teej se ,tanahaiyon se.
Sab tapasya tod dalo,
Ab saho na
Kuchh kaho na !!
Syaah sannaton main hamane,
Umr katee hai tanhaa,
Tang aur andhi surangen,
Is gufaa se us gufaa.
Saans thi sahami hui si,
Dhadakanon ko ek darr,
Itnaa tanhaa aur lambaa,
Zindgi ka uff safar.
Door meelon door jalati ,
Lau koi lagatee ho tum ,
Tum ho,tum ho,Tum hi tum ho ,
Ho naa tum, tum, ho naa tum.
Pal se pal tak jee rahe hain,
Tum hi pal pal aas ho na,
Ek pal to aur thaharo ,
Ek pal dikhati raho na .
Kuchh kaho na !!
26 comments:
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ohhh my gooodddd
kya poem likhi hai yar, aacha kiske liye likhi hai batao na
kash mere liye likhi hoti kitni lucky hai wo girl jiske liye aap ye likhte ho aur agar koi nai hai to mere bare me kya khayal hai
apka contact info do me apko call karungi
bbye
love u
rahulji hi
apki poems ka to jawab nahi aap acha na likho ye ho nai sakta
aur ye shristha ye to apki deewani ho gai hai
pagal ho gai hai apki poems pad ke
pata nai kya karegi galti se b ise apka no. mat dena ya koi contact mat dena varna aap to gay kam se apse shadi kiye bina nai manegi
and belive me i m serious
keep going
tc
hello rahul
yar ye apne kya kiya aap itna aach kyu likhte ho ye batao
aur likhte ho to post kyu karte ho
ye shrishtha na jane kya ho gaya hai ise me iska deewana tha are bahut sare the lekin isne hum sabko apki poems padne ke bad rakhi band di
:(
pls kuch karo pure college me apki poems ka atank hai ladko me
har ladki apki deewani hoti ja rahi hai
hey,
I like that Image that u have placed for the poem.. Its just amazing....!!!
I read the recent poem, I run short of word to praise you.
The best para-
"Sau janam ka saath apna,
Sans ka dhadkan se jaise,
Aas ka jeevan se jaise,
Kaise kate saal solah,
Shyam ki jogan ke jaise.
Jhoot ke parde na dhoondo,
Sach kaho na .
Kuchh kaho na .."
Amazing... !!!
Looking forward for more such peoms.
Regards.
Princess :)
hey thanx Princess
and yes shrishtha not mobile number but ha rite now i can give u my id
jain.rahul21@gmail.com
sorry sweety but abi isis se kam chalao
bura mat manna i respect ur feelings lekin sirf poem pad ke how can u go so crazzy
thankkkkkkkkkk gooooooooood apne reply to kiya rahul ji
pata hai kitni betab thi me apke reply ke liye
i m soooooooooo happyy ki apne reply kiya lekin
ye kya apne apna no. nai diya. thik hai de
doge lkein me apse bat ko kar naui sakti na
kya karu mere pas net connection nai hai.
monday ko to pure frnds ko treat apke reply
ane ki khushi me
thank u
i m happy hapy happy happy happy
very happy :)
and thank u ki apko meri feelings ki kadra
hai, varna jakla ke ladke kahan aise hote hai
aur aap jaisa aaache insan ko dusre ki
feelings ki kadra nai hogi to aur kisko hogi
bbye
tc
Arrey kya aap yehi baithi rehti ho kya mere
blog pe
mere comment karte he apen comment kar diya
thank u for being such a big fan of my poems
hello boss!!!!! u r great and now a days you are not at your desk most of the times.....
enjoy...
bye
hello rahul ji
kaisi hai aap
kya bat hai apne bahut dino se kuch likha nai
kya hua apko
aap thik to hai na
pls bataiye
na
please reply karna is post ka
muze bahut chinta ho rahi hai apki,
hello rahul ji(ju)
aap kahan gayab ho gay hai, ye shristha bahut pareshan ho rahi hai apke liye.
na dhnag se khati hai na piti hai
bas apki poems ko padti rehti hai aur jab se aap ne koi poem nai likhi hai iske hal kharab hai
ek bar to ye apki chinta me itni tention me aa gai ki unconcious ho gai
2 din hospital me rakha tha ise
pls jo b hai aap isse ek bar bat kar lena
phoen pe nai to kam se kam yehi reply kar dena.
nahi nahi rahul ji
ye namita to bas u he kuch b bolti rehti hai
muze kuch nai hua
aap meri chinta mat kariyega
bas apna dhyan rakhiye aur please contact me rehna
bye
tc
LOVE U
helllo rahul
whz up ?
i m aarti shristha ki frnd
sach he kehti hai hamare college ki ladkiya ki ladka ho to rahul ji jaisa romantic varna hum to kunwari hi aachi
yar itne romantic kaise ho aap
aur ye shristha ki baachi apko apna sb kuch man baithi hai
na jae kya karegi
aap jo b sohcho iske bare me lein boss ye to aap pe mar miti hai wo b saache dil se mene aaj tak ise aisa nai dekha jaisa abi dekh rai hu
hope u r fine
waiting for your reply !!!!1
LOVE U !!!!!1
HEY RAHUL SWEETIE,
First of all thank u so much for writting grt and ur biggest peom for me. Thanks a lot. I m seeing that some ppl gone mad for u but i hope u will not forget me and the promises u made with me.
AND I THINK U REMEMBER THE NEW LIFE WE STARTED OR U STARTED 2 MONTS BACK ;)......
hi neha ji
kaisi hai aap, aap log likhne ke jageh mera nam he likh deti,
me to rahul ko janti he nai bas unki poems me dub jati hu
kher jo b hai unhone apse jo b promise kiye hai pata nai par me to dil se unhe apna manti hu.
vaise neha ji aap hai kaun aur kya relation hai apka rahul ji ke sath bataiye to muze ek bar !!!!!!!
WELL DEAR DON'T YOU THINK THE RELATION IS VERY CLEAR FROM MY PREV POST. HEY RAHUL PLEASE RIGHT SMTHING ATLEAST EK REPLY TO KARO......
DUSHT HO TUM BAHUT .....WELL shrishtha ki nishtha for rahul is good...... BUT rahul told me abt u today only.....
RAHUL DEAR....milo tum zara mujhse ;)
arrey rahul ji(ju) muze to yahan apka sandwich banta hua dikh raha hai
BEST OF LUCK JI(JU)
HEY RAHUL NO SANDWITCH DEAR.....U KNOW THAT U R ALWAYS FREE FROM MY SIDE BUT I NEVER TOLD U NOT TO REPLY SO YOU SHOULD REPLY FOR UR FANS .....ATLEAST JUST GIVE YOUR THANKS TO UR FANS WHO APPRECIATE YOU THIS MUCH AND LUV U......
hello neha hows ya ?
tum ye kya kar rahi ho
apne aap ko kyu in sab se compare kar rahi ho
ye sab meri fans hai aur shrishtha A.C.
lekin tum, tum
to meri jan ho jindgi ho jane jahan ho sab
kuch tum he to ho
fir kyu ye sab likhe ja rahi ho
oye shut up don't write such things here...pagal.....
hello Rahul Ji
kaise ho
muze kuch fark nai padta aap meer bare me kya
sochte ho aur kisis aur ke liye kya sochte ho
me to apko pyar karti hu
fir bhale he muze wahi sthan mile jo radha ko krishna ne diya tha
GooD Morning Rahul Ji
Kaise hai aap
kal ke liye me apse mafi mangna chchti hu agar
mene kuch galat kaha ho to
lekin mere dil me sab kuch saf hai aur jo bhi
hai me yahan pe sabke samne bayan kar chuki
hu
hey Dude wats goin on?????
u r in demand so wen is my no????
hope m in ur list....
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